Thanks for the comments! And it's fine on the ending; I had gotten to the point where I wanted the story finished and although the conclusion is all right, it's not my best ever.
I had way too much fun visualizing Fakir hitting the ground with a definite THUD after seeing Ahiru transform.
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
timeasmymeasure
no subject
Date: 2011-08-14 05:10 pm (UTC)I had way too much fun visualizing Fakir hitting the ground with a definite THUD after seeing Ahiru transform.